Sri Aurobindo

Letters of Sri Aurobindo

Third Series

Fragment ID: 21102

May I say a word about the four lines of Coleridge which you criticise? –

He prayeth best who loveth best

All things both great and small,

For the dear God who loveth us –

He made and loveth all.

The sentimentalism of the “dear God” is obviously extra childlike and may sound childish even. If it had been written by Coleridge as his own contribution to thought or his personal feeling described in its native language it would have ranked him very low. But Coleridge was a great metaphysician or at any rate an acute and wide-winged thinker, not a sentimental prattling poet of the third order. Mark that the idea in the lines is not essentially poor; otherwise expressed it could rank among great thoughts and stand as the basis of a philosophy and ethics founded on bhakti. There are one or two, lines of the Gita which are based on a similar thought, though from the Vedantic, not the dualist point of view. But throughout the “Ancient Mariner” Coleridge is looking at things from the point of view and the state of mind of the most simple and childlike personality possible, the Ancient Mariner who feels and thinks only with the barest ideas and the most elementary and primitive emotions. The lines he writes here record the feeling which. such a mind and heart would draw from what he had gone through. Are they not then perfectly in place and just in the right tone for such a purpose? You may say that it lowers the tone of the poem. I don’t know – the tone of the poem is deliberately intended to be that of an unsophisticated ballad simplicity and ballad mentality – it is not the ideas but the extraordinary beauty of rhythm and vividness of vision and fidelity to a certain mystic childlike key that makes it such a wonderful and perfect poem. This is of course only a point of view; but it came to me several times as an answer that could be made to your criticism, so I put it on paper.