I am afraid I could not give a detailed criticism or point out any particular defect – only my general impression. I find this one good. There is still some sense of effort, but that will pass as the channels become clear.Sri Aurobindo
Letters of Sri Aurobindo
Fragment ID: 15718
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Sri Aurobindo — Sahana Devi
Undated
Yes, you can cultivate your poetic faculty in the way you mention – you will get the help.
(About my poetry)
I am afraid I could not give a detailed criticism or point out any particular defect – only my general impression. I find this one good. There is still some sense of effort, but that will pass as the channels become clear.